What you write speaks volumes

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Language savvy freshmen can distinguish bright, sparkling sentences from sentences that are dull and need polish and editing. Examine these sentences - written by your classmates, then rate them on a scale of 1 -5 - (5) being perfect, with no mistakes and (1) indicating improvement needed. Explain all of your answers in two to three sentences.
These sentences were taken from the responses to question #3 of my latest Survey Monkey survey.


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Mr. Songhai
9/28/06